Friday, 26 September 2008

About Matthew O' Sullivan and what we r doing about it

Hi, its Alex Robet
We have had lots of people that have gone missing, but we have had a teenager that has gone missing which we haven't solved yet.
His name is Matthew O' Sullivan, but his nickname is Bubba. He ran away when he was 16 years old and it was 5 years ago, so now he is 21 years old. One of Bubba's mates sent in this crime. Through Bubba's child-hood he has been changing his behavior. I mean like... well, let me tell you...
At first when he was young, his behavior was great. But when he started to get older he began to be naughty and very mean. He started to bully other children at his school. We think there is a reason for this behavior, let me tell you. We have got a story about when Spike and Bubba going to the Water Tower. And this is the story about them going to the Water Tower.
Bubba's Mum didn't care about where Bubba went, so one day Bubba went out with one of his mate called Spike, they were going to the Water Tower. So they got there stuff together (hopefully they have got all there stuff) and off they went. When they took there first step into the Water Tower it was dark, damp, smelt oily and Spike smelt bat muck because there were black, blind bats. Then Spike spotted a ladder, so Bubba and Spike climb up it. As Bubba looked down from the high distance he was at, he started to feel dizzy and felt like he was going to faint. But then Spike shouted to Bubba and said, "Come on hurry up." After five minutes Bubba finally finished climbing up the ladder.

Tuesday, 16 September 2008

What's been happening in 5/6's Mantle so far

Hi Alex Robet, again.

I have had an exciting day. Well, an exciting day more like an busy, because,well, let me tell you. We have received a letter from a man called Spike. Spike ha asked us to find a boy. In this company we have had many people missing, but we still have found the person that went missing. His name is Matthew O' Sullivan, but his nickname is Bubba.

Friday, 12 September 2008

Personal learning thinking skills

Identify questions to answer and problems to resolve.
I questions the suspects anf found out the most likely person was Deadleg, number three.

Begin to support conclusions,using reasoned arguments and evidence. Children are to back up there statements in their arguments with evidence.

Ask questions to extend their thinking.

Questions their own and others' assumptions.

Wednesday, 10 September 2008

Aboat me in our 5/6s Mantle

Hi, I'm Alex Bay.
I'm 28 years old (soon 29 years old).
and I have had 12 years experience.
I have two puppies, who are twins and they are called Beca and Buster.
My job in the company is caring and looking after the detective dogs and puppies.
My scariest crime has been when a 3 year old girl when missing for 1 and a half years. But after a few days we found her trapped in her parents boot,then gave her back to her parents.

Our company name is called Total Vision Detectives.
Our company has been on for 25 years.
Our crime that we are still working on is... well it's a long story, so lets cut it short.
There was a crime at the King Head's school. Somebody had stolen five trophies. The time of the crime scene was at 10.00am. There were four people who saw the crime, one was a art teacher, one was a 5 year old girl, one was a caretaker and the other one was a window cleaner.There were four witnesses, they were called Maggie, Dead-leg, BB West and Jake. We are still working on the crime.
Thank you for listening about me and our company. And that's all I have got to say. But a few little words.

Good Bye! See you soon blogger.
From Ella xx